Last we all showed our own rough cut. I found there was still some problem need to solve in my  rough cut. I have tried to figure out how to make my story clear. Another thing is 4 and half minutes still too long and the reason of fire accident confused people. I have tried to cut the old rough cut less than 3 minutes. I have deleted some walk cycle shots, Shelly told me the change the point of view to show the character’s walking. I drew a light in the cinema that broken down, there was some spark fall down on the floor, it could cause the fire accident.

This video is the 1st part of new rough cut, the rest of it has nothing to change.

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